
Hello, Great Readers of our series! Just in case you haven’t visited before, let me tell you a little about A Great Nephew and A Great Aunt. My great nephew, Landon (a fifth-grader) and I (his great aunt) collaborate. I write a poem which he illustrates. We started this collaboration last fall and have had so much fun with it that we decided to invite others along. Landon and I will continue to have a new episode on the second Friday of each month. The other Fridays are filling up quickly with guests. I have created a page on my website to view all the episodes of A Great Nephew and a Great Aunt. Click HERE to visit the page and enjoy past episodes.
Today it is my pleasure to welcome the collaborative team . . .
Randi Sonenshine and 11-year-old son, Ethan
First of all, Randi shared some background: This poem started as an assignment for Renee La Tulippe’s Lyrical Language Lab (which I highly recommend). Originally, it was only the first stanza, but I started thinking about all of the possibilities for backyard brunchers, and it took off from there. I asked Ethan to pick his favorite stanza to illustrate, and he chose the first because he liked the idea of camouflaged caterpillars.
Randi’s Poem
Ethan’s Art

I never knew backyard brunches could be so much fun 🙂 Many thanks to Randi and Ethan for sharing their creative collaboration with us today!
By the way, don’t miss Ethan’s fabulous self-portrait below.

Meet Ethan: Ethan is a ukulele-playing magician who loves to read and write stories, poems, and songs. Ethan is also involved in musical theater. He has appeared in Seussical the Musical, The Little Mermaid, and several other stage productions. He will be entering middle school as a sixth-grader this fall and can’t wait to join his mom’s Book Club and Young Writer’s Society.
Meet Randi: Randi is a middle school literacy coach by day and a stealthy kid-lit writer and rhyme schemer by night. She lives in northwest Georgia with her husband, Marty, sons Jacob and Ethan, a very sneaky schnauzer and an immortal goldfish. Her short story, The Inside Name, will be published in Cricket magazine later this year. You can find her at her blog, The Prosey Tree or on Twitter as @rsonenshine.
Margaret at Reflections on the Teche has the Poetry Friday Roundup today. What exactly is Poetry Friday? Click HERE for a full explanation by the awesome Renée LaTulippe.
Randi and Ethan, you make a great team. Ethan, I love your caterpillar’s sated smile after nibbling that tasty green leaf. Randi, I love your title and the “crunch” you have put into your poem. From now on, I will think of caterpillars eating brunch when I see them munching! Ethan, your self-portrait is wonderful! Keep playing the ukulele and making magic. 🙂
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Wonderful pairing! Well done.
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Thanks, Diana!
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I love this post! 😀
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Thanks so much, Erik! I love your blog, by the way. Keep up the good work!
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Penny, thanks again for having us, and also for creating an opportunity for such a wonderful collaborative experience!
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You’re so welcome, Randi and Ethan. It was my pleasure 🙂
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I knew coming into this that Randi’s poem would be a fun treat. Love all the great language, especially the verbs and onomatopoeia. But I love Ethan’s illustration too– the perspective, those chew holes, the catepillar’s sneaky, sweet smile, and the fact that he remembered to sign his work too, as all good artists should. 🙂
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Michelle, like the caterpillar, Ethan is sweet, but sneaky. I never made that connection until I read your comment. I guess it’s true (of artists AND writers) that there is something of the artist in every work! I’m glad you enjoyed our post. Thanks for taking the time to stop by!
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Thanks for stopping by Michelle. I love that Ethan signed his work too, That is definitely the sign of a good artist!
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What a clever poem. I just loved it. And Ethan’s illustration of the caterpillar is wonderful. Liked his self-portrait too. So great to encourage art and imagination with kids.
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Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed our collaboration. It was so fun to work on this together!
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Thank you for stopping in, Pat!
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What a great poem! And the drawing is perfect. Very talented family. Thanks for sharing.
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Rosi, you’re such a great supporter of this series! Thanks so much for coming by!
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Thanks, Rosi!
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Fantastic language in this poem, Randi! Well done! And I love your son’s colorful illustration, too!
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Thanks for coming by, Carrie 🙂
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Thanks, Carrie! We had so much fun. Penny has created something wonderful with this series, hasn’t she?
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Cool beans, Randi and Ethan! I love Ethan’s self-portrait too!
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We were really lucky to get two pieces of artwork from Ethan, weren’t we?
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Indeedy!
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Thanks, Julie! He loves your art, as well!
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LOVED this truly! Such a pleasure. Thanks to Vivian Kirkfield I saw this on facebook and took a minute to come and read. Terrific stuff! 🙂
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So glad you came by Clar. I hope you’ll stop in every Friday for the series. It’s a ton of fun!
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I am definitely going to try to stop by, Penny! I loved reading your post so much I shared it on my facebook wall. Thanks so much! 🙂
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I posted this on facebook and people really liked it! 🙂
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We are so happy you stopped by! Thanks for your sweet comment!
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Wonderful summery poem, Randi! And I love Ethan’s caterpillar to go with it. I also love that he plays the ukelele, too. 🙂
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Thanks for stopping in, Teresa!
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Glad you liked it, Teresa! The “Uke” has become almost another appendage for him!
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That’s awesome…it’s a great instrument that doesn’t get as much respect as its bigger stringed cousins. 🙂
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Love that it tells a full story in perfect rhyme and meter. Ethan’s caterpillar looks full, happy and satisfied! Great poem and picture.
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Thanks for coming by, Carole 🙂
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Thanks so much, Carole! We are so glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to stop by!
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I’m so impressed by this young uke-playing artiste! And Randi’s clever poem had my toe tapping too! Bravo!
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It’s a toe-tapping poem for sure! And I agree…Ethan is an impressive young man!
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Thanks, Cathy! Ethan and I are thrilled you stopped by!
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Very well done! Enjoyed this Friday’s edition. Talented poets and artist. Thanks, Larry D
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Thanks for coming by, Larry! See you in a few weeks!!!!
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Thanks, Larry!
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Love this happy, hungry, nibbling, crunching caterpillar, Ethan (and your self-portrait!) And your expanded poem is delightful, Randi!
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Thanks for coming by today, Buffy 🙂
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Thanks, Buffy!
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First of all…I remember that poem, Randi…it was really cute when I saw it in Renee’s class…but oh the places you’ve taken it!!!! I love it!
And Ethan, I am totally impressed with both your illustration…and your self-portrait. I think you have really talent…maybe you will be illustrating your mom’s picture books one day. 🙂
Thanks, Penny…this is such a great series!
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You’re welcome, Vivan! It is so much fun for me!
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Thanks, Vivian! Also, thanks for sharing on your FB page! Ethan and I had so much fun collaborating. I’m sure we will do it again!
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Excellent poem! Spot on! And the caterpillar may very well be the happiest, most satisfied looking crawler I have every seen! Great detail, too- I love the way the holes on the leaf look so real and 3Dish! What a team!
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Thanks, Carrie! Those nimble nibblers love eating all our parsley each year, but fat caterpillars = beautiful butterflies, so we don’t complain!
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Both poem and picture are wonderful!
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Thanks, Catherine. I’m so glad you stopped by!
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Thanks for dropping in, Catherine 🙂
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I love how you developed this poem from class, Randi! And what a great illustrator you have. Wonderful camouflaged caterpillar and even wonderful-er self-portrait. (And extra props for the musical theater hobby. Ethan is clearly a boy of discerning taste and talent!) 🙂
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Thanks for dropping by, Renée. Randi and Ethan did a bangup job with their Backyard Brunch!
And I’m sure your class has inspired many a poem 🙂
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Renee, I will be sure he sees your comment! His latest obsessions are magic and the ukulele; we just flew to Maryland, and he entertained random strangers in the airport with both!
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Thanks, Renee! Ethan is indeed how you described him. He’s the one singing a Les Miserables song during an audition, while everyone else is singing Disney tunes! As for the poem, I am actually expanding it into a PB that is part verse and part non-fiction prose about the backyard habitat. I hope to have it finished before the WOW retreat in July. I’ll keep you posted!
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I love the language in the poem and the character of Ethan’s caterpillar! What a great collaboration!
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Thanks, Rebecca!
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I love how this collaboration goes beyond the very hungry caterpillar to the whole backyard 🙂 Thanks for coming by, Rebecca.
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A very sweet and nicely crafted poem! Ethan’s caterpillar is so appealing, and I also like his self portrait! Great team!
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Thanks so much! I will be sure to tell Ethan!
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He’s a talented one, isn’t he, Iza? And Randi’s poem is so fun to read aloud!
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Sweet! I backyard brunched once when I was sitting outside with Mom. A butterfly flew by and I ATE IT. Mom said the word, “Oh no you didn’t!” …..but oh yes I did! I wish you were there to draw me, Ethan.
Love and licks,
Cupcake
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Ha! He would have fun with that one, Genevieve!
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A butterfly??? Oh my! Well I imagine you have a big variety for brunch when you get the chance, Cupcake 🙂 Thanks to you and Mom for coming by.
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Randi and Ethan, What a wonderful way to start my Friday morning with a lovely poem and a beautiful picture. Great teamwork!
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Thanks, Robin. We are glad you enjoyed it!
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Thanks for stopping by, Robin!
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