Happy National Poetry Month!
and
Happy 2015 Kidlitosphere Progressive Poem

The Kidlitosphere Progressive Poem is hosted by poet, Irene Latham. Irene had this brilliant idea in 2012 and each year since words have wandered from poet to poet all through the month of April. A progressive poem is more delicious than a progressive dinner because the words are here to savor and enjoy over and over again. How does it work? Each day of the month, the poem lands at a different blog with a different poet adding a line. Here are the first nineteen lines of the poem along with my addition for line 20.
She lives without a net, walking along the alluvium of the delta.
Shoes swing over her shoulder, on her bare feet stick jeweled flecks of dark mica.
Hands faster than fish swing at the ends of bare brown arms. Her hair flows,
snows in wild wind as she digs in the indigo varnished handbag,
pulls out her grandmother’s oval cuffed bracelet,
strokes the turquoise stones, and steps through the curved doorway.
Tripping on her tail she slips hair first down the slide… splash!
She glides past glossy water hyacinth to shimmer with a school of shad,
listens to the ibises roosting in the trees of the cypress swamp
an echo of Grandmother’s words, still fresh in her windswept memory.
Born from the oyster, expect the pearl.
Reach for the rainbow reflection on the smallest dewdrop.
The surface glistens, a shadow slips above her head, a paddle dips
she reaches, seizes. She’s electric energy and turquoise eyes.
Lifted high, she gulps strange air – stares clearly into
Green pirogue, crawfish trap, startled fisherman
with turquoise eyes, twins of her own, riveted on her wrist–
She’s swifter than a dolphin, slipping away, leaving him only a handful of
memories of his own grandmother’s counsel: Watch for her. You’ll have but one chance to
determine—to decide. Garner wisdom from the water and from the pearl of the past.
And tomorrow Tara at A Teaching Life will take us one line further . . . one line closer. Other contributors are listed below.
Just for fun, you can click HERE if you’d like to read the progressive poems from 2012-2014.
1 Jone at Check it Out
2 Joy at Poetry for Kids Joy
3 Heidi at My Juicy Little Universe
4 Laura at Writing the World for Kids
5 Charles at Poetry Time Blog
6 Ramona at Pleasures from the Page
7 Catherine at Catherine Johnson
8 Irene at Live Your Poem
9 Mary Lee at Poetrepository
10 Michelle at Today’s Little Ditty
11 Kim at Flukeprints
12 Margaret at Reflections on the Teche
13 Doraine at DoriReads
14 Renee at No Water River
15 Robyn at Life on the Deckle Edge
16 Ruth at There is No Such Thing as a Godforsaken Town
17 Buffy at Buffy’s Blog
18 Sheila at Sheila Renfro
19 Linda at Teacher Dance
20 Penny at A Penny and her Jots
21 Tara at A Teaching Life
22 Pat at Writer on a Horse
23 Tamera at The Writer’s Whimsy
24 Tricia at The Miss Rumphius Effect
25 Tabatha at The Opposite of indifference
26 Brian at Walk the Walk
27 Jan at Bookseedstudio
28 Amy at The Poem Farm
29 Donna at Mainely Write
30 Matt at Radio, Rhythm & Rhyme
The poem is coming along very well! 😀
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Late to the party, and such fun to read these lines together (here on Wed.)
Water wisdom! That pearl of the past! Wonderful –Paddling fast to Tara’s now….
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Ooh, Penny, nice way to throw the ball into the fisherman’s court!
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Oh, the pressure! This is so good. I hope I don’t just add something like “and then…” because I am now at a loss for words!
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Lovely line, Penny! I love how this poem is like a pearl itself– it keeps circling back, layer upon layer.
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What fun! There are some real pros contributing. Love your line, Penny.
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Oh, Grandma…help us know! Beautiful…I love the weaving into past lines and then back out again…
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Love that “pearl of the past.” What is it that he must decide???
Interesting how the focus has now shifted to our fisherman and his grandmother’s advice!
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Buffy, I know what he must decide and started to share it in my line…but Tara may have other ideas!
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Perfect line, Penny! It must be so tempting to write a big batch of story at this point. But you ladies are smoothly flowing into the next line like silk.
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Just beautiful! It’s almost magical how the words of so many poets flow together coherently.
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Ah. Grandmother wisdom. Great twist & cliffhanger.
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Terrific to refer back to those earlier words, Penny. I wonder how he will solve the problem?
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Great job!
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Ooh, “the pearl of the past.” What next for our mermaid-girl, what next?
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I love your line, Penny. Poem is progressing nicely!
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