Thanks to Jane at Raincity Librarian for hosting the Poetry Friday Roundup today. If you’d like to know more about Poetry Friday, click HERE for an explanation by Renee LaTulippe.

Hello Friends! Just In case you haven’t visited before, let me tell you a little about A Great Nephew and A Great Aunt. My great nephew, Landon (now an eighth-grader) and I (his great aunt) collaborate. I write a poem which he illustrates. We started this collaboration in the fall of 2014 and had so much fun with it that we decided to invite others along. Landon and I will continue to have a new episode on one Friday of each month. The other Fridays are filling up quickly with guests sharing poetry and art in beautiful collaborations. I have created a page on my website to view all the episodes of A Great Nephew and a Great Aunt. Click HERE to visit the page and enjoy past episodes.
**GIVEAWAY! Before you view today’s collaboration I wanted to let you know that Patricia has generously offered a signed copy of Pick a PIne Tree. Today’s collaboration is based on an excerpt from this beautiful book and I have a feeling you’re going to want get your hands on it! I already have my hands on a copy and I’m in love with it! Hug! Hug!
**All you have to do is leave a comment below by December 1st at midnight CST. A winner will be randomly selected. Those who enter must have a US address.
About the Story: Part of the magic of the Christmas season stems from the traditions that families and friends take part in every year: hanging up stockings; putting lights in the windows; and, one of the most important of all, picking out and taking home the Christmas tree. With style and warmth, debut author Patricia Toht and Jarvis, the author-illustrator of Alan’s Big, Scary Teeth, evoke all the rituals of decorating the tree — digging out boxes jam-packed with ornaments and tree trimmings, stringing tinsel, and, at long last, turning on those twinkling lights. Joyously drawn and rhythmically written, this celebration of family, friends, and the holiday season is as merry as the tradition it depicts.
Look What Reviewers Have to Say! (Notice the starred review from Kirkus 😀 )
“Pick this delightful story for a Christmas storytime, for library collections, or for family reading around the Christmas tree.”
~ Kirkus Reviews (starred review)
“Holiday spirit crackles in Toht’s warm, step-by-step recounting of how humble stately pines transform into shimmering Christmas trees.”
~ Publishers Weekly
And now it’s my pleasure to share a creative collaboration from . . .
Patricia Toht and a First Grade Class
From Patricia: When Penny invited me to do a post for “A Great Nephew and a Great Aunt,” I hoped to be able to nab some young relatives to collaborate with me. But our family is spread around the country, and we wouldn’t be gathering together until after the holidays.
Then came an invitation from the American Writers Museum in Chicago to host a story time featuring my new book, Pick a PIne Tree. How exciting! I asked Penny if students might work instead of relatives, and she agreed.
Ms. Jackson’s class from Ogden International School arrived in high spirits. Pick a PIne Tree tells the story of a family turning a pine tree into a Christmas tree, so we brainstormed about decorations. The kids had loads of ideas for ornaments, and I told them about my original text:
“My editor in England didn’t like one of the ornaments,” I said. “Which one do you think it was?”
The students made their guesses before I revealed the answer: the cookie boy.
“What?” they said. “Why?”
“She wanted me to use gingerbread man,” I said.
But gingerbread man had too many beats and ruined the rhyme, I explained. I sent a note back to the editor.
“The readers will see in the illustrations that cookie boy is a gingerbread man,” I insisted.
“No cookie boy,” the answer remained.
I was grumpy about it until it finally dawned on me what the crux of the problem was – Brits don’t use the word cookie; they say biscuit!
“How about biscuit boy?” I suggested.
I then read this passage from the finished book:
“What’s missing?” I asked.
“The cookie boy!” the kids called out.
In the end, I explained that I left out gingerbread man/cookie boy completely, and the book is really no worse for it!
Following story time, the students made their own Christmas trees. They used markers to decorate foam cutouts and tied on a gold ribbon for hanging. Little bags of jewels went home with them to apply later (so they wouldn’t fall off in transit).
The trees were super cute. And, in the end, it tickled me pink that nearly every student included a cookie boy on their tree!
The Students’ Artwork Inspired by Patricia’s Book
Many thanks for Patricia and the students for this heartwarming collaboration!
Meet Patricia: Patricia Toht once owned a children’s bookshop called Never Never Land before turning a love of books into a love of writing. She is the author of All Aboard the London Bus and Pick a Pine Tree, as well as numerous poems in children’s magazines. She lives with her family outside of Chicago and very soon will be setting out with them to find the perfect Christmas tree.
What a lovely post Penny, beautiful book and rich experience all around! I did like cookie boy too. I’ve been to the American Writer’s Museum–what a treat this whole happening must have been for all the students, thanks for all!
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I loved All Aboard the London Bus and I’m sure I’ll love this one too! Especially if I win the free copy! 😉
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I think it would fit your tastes perfectly, Sandy! Thanks for coming by 😀
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That was a new and different take on your usual, Penny. I liked the story of the collaboration with the kids and the way they each put a “cookie boy” on their tree. I have a cookie boy who goes on mine every year, made by one of my kids in preschool with silver cord icing and marker eyes. It’s one of my favorites. Looks like a great book. I hope I win!
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Yes. I love collaboration of all kinds as long as it involves kid’s art and poetic text! Your cookie boy sounds so cute! Thanks for coming by 😀
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Sounds like a great book, and love the story behind he loss of ‘cookie boy’. Always good to get an inside peek at the editorial process.
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I agree, Sally. I love hearing the stories about editorial process. Always interesting. Thanks for coming by 😀
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What a wonderful post to start off the holiday season, Penny. The book looks wonderful, and the trees are decorated with quite traditional things, including that ‘cookie boy’. I love hearing about the discussion/argument between Patricia and her editor. It looks like the kids had a great time, and the poem is just right!
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It’s a wonderful book to share at Christmas. It celebrates the Christmas tree in a beautiful way. I imagine the kids were so excited! The excerpt is just right…as is the entire book. Truly delightful! Thanks for coming by, Linda 😀
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What a delightful book just in time for Christmas. I love the Christmas trees those students made.
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Thanks, Kay. It’s a book for the holidays for sure!
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Our first home had a small Christmas tree farm in the back. So I was immediately drawn to the story when I saw it. I put this book on hold at the library and am afraid I won’t get it in time for Christmas. Want to review it! I was taken by this story immediately. I love the story behind the story and the illustrations are so festive. Beautiful book!
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I hope your hold is filled before Christmas, Patricia! It sounds like you had a short walk to pick a pine tree in your very own backyard. I think my hubby would’ve liked that….
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I hope your hold at the library comes up soon, Pat. I think you’ll love this book. It’s so beautiful! Thanks for coming by 😀
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This was such a unique idea to let the students be a part of the fun. It’s a great book and the kind you can read over and over again. Penny, you’ve done it again—another winning post!
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We had so much fun, Sherri! The kids were busy bees working on those trees!
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Thanks, Sherri! It’s easy to come up with winning posts because my guests are creative collaborators!
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How sweet that the little artists made sure the Cookie Boy was there! Lovely work all around.
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Isn’t that the best, Rosa? Warmed my heart on a chilly Chicago day!
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Sorry, Rosi! Darn auto-correct.
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I thought that was sweet, too, Rosi! Thanks for coming by 😀
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Decorating the tree is my favorite Christmas tradition we have. I love all the kids homemade ornaments the best. I will enjoy this book very much.
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I love decorating the tree, too, Danielle. I love the colored lights and I love putting up the ornaments and talking about why each one is special. Thanks for coming by 😀
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I hope the book is a nice addition to your decorating day, Danielle. I love homemade ornaments, too. Especially my son’s hideous toilet paper tube snowman.
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Looks like a lovely book! Congrats, Patricia & thank you for introducing it, Penny 🙂
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Thanks for coming by, Maria. It’ is such a lovely book!
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Thank you, Maria! Hard to believe that tree picking time is just around the corner!
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Fabuloso post! Love the book (am interviewing Pat for AS). Interesting to hear about the cookie boy, and great seeing the kids’ decorated trees. That ornament spread is my favorite from the book. 🙂 (No need to enter me in the giveaway.)
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I love the book, too, Jama. It makes me feel warm and cozy and Christmassy! I love it when a book does such a great job that it elicits such strong feelings! I can’t wait for your post on AS. I know it will make me love Patty’s book even more!
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I’m so grateful, Jama, that you and Penny are hosting Pick a Pine Tree on your blogs! I love that spread from the book, too – so many of Jarvis’ ornaments look just like ones we have on our tree.
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This sounds like the perfect book to add to our holiday book advent calendar! I love hearing about the editorial changes too! Thanks Patricia and Penny – another great collaboration!
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Definitely, Amanda. You’ll love it. Yes, so much fun to hear about editorial changes! I eat that up! I hope all is well with you ❤
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A holiday book advent calendar? What a terrific idea, Amanda!! It makes me smile to think that Pick a Pine Tree might earn a day. 🙂
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Ha! Interesting about the cookie boy/gingerbread boy snafu! Looks like a wonderful book!
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It’s wonderful, B.J. Definitely on my huggable list! I loved hearing about the editorial back and forth. I do love the final text so it seems like the team effort paid off. Thanks for coming by 😀
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As they say, BJ, writing is re-writing! Glad the cookie boy retains his place in Jarvis’ illustrations.
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Biscuit boy was a brilliant alternative! Can’t wait to add this delightful tale to our treasured Christmas book collection!
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It’s a real treasure, Cathy. I have my book sitting out in the room where I read my picture books. No use putting it on a shelf because I plan to read it many more times between now and Christmas! Thanks for coming by 😀
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I thought “biscuit boy” might squeak by, Cathy, but then we would’ve had the opposite problem, I guess – folks in the US would be looking for some odd buttermilk biscuit ornament!
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Love this! I use to live near a Christmas Tree farm and would often wonder what the looked like all dressed in their new homes. It sounds like Patricia captured this in her wonderful rhymes.
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She did, Julie. And how fun to live near a Christmas tree farm. I grew up in Colorado and when we’d hike or go up in the high country in our jeep I would scope out perfect Christmas trees. So did my dad and he would return before Christmas to cut ours…easily done with a permit from the forest service. Thanks for coming by 😀
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Thank you, Julie! It really was a joy to think about all of the details that go into decorating and try to capture all of the different senses.
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