April is National Poetry Month. Irene Latham organized the 2012 KidLit Progressive Poem. Watch it grow day-by-day as it travels across the Kidlitosphere. This is Day 7 and I am adding Line 7.
If you are reading thisyou must be hungry
Kick off your silver slippers
Come sit with us a spell A hanky, here, now dry your tears And fill your glass with wine Now, pour. The parchment has secrets To be continued tomorrow by Jone at Deo Writer.
This is perfect Penny! I am just making my way back to the progressive poem. I can’t imagine where this will be on the 16th when it gets to me–Your line was fantastic! 😉
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This really is fun. It’s hard to write your line and then let it go, though!
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I already starting to stress about my line!!! So much pressure…Hahaha! 🙂
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Ah…pour the wine, or pour the secrets, the news, the things that are weighing on your heart???
I’m off to Jone’s to see where she’s taken this experiment!
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This is fun! I just caught up to Day 10. Wonderful things are taking place in these lines.
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I love secrets!
I love secrets!
I love secrets!
La la la la la la!
(Sorry…your hymn got me feeling all singy.)
This is a wonderful turn!
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Thanks, Amy! I just met your blog through Renee’s No Water River. I am thrilled to make its acquaintance and yours, for that matter. Your talent is amazing. Being a Penny myself, I especially loved your lucky penny poem:-)
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Wow! Always something unexpected. Nice addition, Penny.
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Thanks, Miranda. I look forward to your line on the 23! Today I was looking back at Brian Lies website at some of his other books (besides the bat ones) and I saw his book, Deep in the Swamp. The cover has alligators on it. I couldn’t help but think of you sitting in the crocodile pool!!! I loved your video and your poem!
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Oh Penny, this is terrific! Love the way this is all unfolding.
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Me, too. I am loving this whole progressive thing.
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Oh, I like that idea. Your lines draw you right in. Great job
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Thanks for checking it out Jennifer. It’s fun!
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Now pour. A command, a desperate longing, a prayer. Such relief. What a wonderful line to move us forward.
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Thanks, Doraine. I was thinking a command…to begin to reveal the secrets!
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Now pour. A command, a desperate longing, a prayer. Such relief. What a marvelous line to move forward with!
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Oooooohh… Secrets! Love the intrigue.
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I know! Such suspense!
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Penny, I love the commanding “Now, pour.” What secrets are coming??? Thank you so much for this lovely contribution!
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Yes…I’m wondering about the secrets, too.
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What a great idea! Your line is wonderful. I particularly like how it started maybe talking about reading the poem and you define it as reading a letter.
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This is fun. I can’t wait to see where the lines are taken.
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Fabulous! Can’t wait to find out what secrets the parchment has!
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I know! I have an idea….but, alas, my ideas no longer matter. It’s out of my hands :•)
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This is a cool idea!
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Very cool. It will interesting to see what happens next.
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It is so fun to watch this poem develop! What a great idea this was! Love your line, Penny 🙂
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Thanks Susanna!
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